http://sln1.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sln1.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bibliodragon 2011-02-07 04:33 pm (UTC)

Well written innuendo is a wonderful thing and you have done a great job here. The pacing of this is excellent and even with dialogue only there is richness to the scene because I can 'hear' the nuances of their tones as the conversation progresses.

Very enjoyable and clever work. Thank you.

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