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Well written innuendo is a wonderful thing and you have done a great job here. The pacing of this is excellent and even with dialogue only there is richness to the scene because I can 'hear' the nuances of their tones as the conversation progresses.
Very enjoyable and clever work. Thank you.
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Very enjoyable and clever work. Thank you.